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[Dead Bodies Full Game]

Alright.

Good game.

A couple of notes. First off, when you get to the mission to shoot the guy's leg in order to keep him alive for questioning. Being that his legs (as well as all the other sticks) were so thin, you had to aim exactly on that little line that is his leg.

Second, grammar. Only one mistake, but I just had to point it out. "You're are best sniper, Johnny".

And now for things that would make the game more difficult. One idea would be to add more people in the scene. It's far too easy to shoot your target when he's the only one there. Throw in a crowd of people, thus making it harder to figure out which one to shoot.

Something else to add would be a time limit. Y'know, whereas if you don't kill your target in time he could simply walk away and you would fail the mission.

'tis a good, simple game. Just needs some improvement.

donut688 responds:

thanks i'll work on those in dead bodies 2

[Seagull Poo Invasion]

Needs more.

It's a good game, but it is really lacking. There are a lot of things you can add to this to make it better.

First, sound effects. You should have SFX for everything in a game.
You should have a sound for when you shoot your gun, and one for when the seagulls poo.

Second, music. I would recommend you add some kind of background music. You could have easily put in the Space Invaders theme in here, or you could have found something better in the Audio Portal.

It's a good game, but it just needs some improvement.

josephtaylor1995 responds:

Thanks for the review, I will add some sound effects and background music.